Again, it's another half of what I thought of, but I thought I could share the idea. Why not?
Here I go...


Somewhere in a huge park where people bicycle, rollerblade, or skateboard.
A young 10 year old, and rich, boy is trying to rollerblade, but being a beginner, he keeps falling. His name is Monty.
As he fell, his butler, Carson, came to help him up. He's also wearing rollerblades.

Carson: Are you alright, Master Monty? You fell again.

Monty gets up.

Monty: Yeah, I'm fine. So, why didn't you fall too?

Carson: Oh, pardon me, sir.

Carson made himself fall.

Monty: HAHAHA!!! That's better!

Monty continues to skate.

Monty: You should know well, Carson, that no one should be better than me at this. Otherwise, I'll have daddy sue whoever is better than me!

Carson: Understood, Master Monty.

Meanwhile...

Burn and her siblings are also in the park.

Burn is on a skateboard

Jamila is on a scooter

Prince is on rollerblades

Jamila: I'm glad school is out for a week. The weather is perfect.

Prince: Hey!!! Look at me!

Burn and Jamila turned to look at Prince. He does some cool tricks(I'm not in the mood to say what he did, so just imagine it yourself)

Jamila: Nice trick, but can you do this?

Jamila does some scooter tricks.

Prince: Well that's cool, but I can't do that. I'm wearing rollerblades. Hey! I have an idea! Let's race! Wanna race, Burn?

Jamila: What!? No! Burn always wins!

Prince: We'll see about that. Well, Burn? Wanna race?

Burn: You sure you want that?

Prince: Yeah, and don't hold back. I'll be able to tell. I want you to give it your all. At least that way, I'll know that I've beaten you with my own skills!

Burn:.....Your on, kid....

Jamila: Oh why not? I'll race too.

They lined up.

Prince: On your mark.....get set....GO!!!

They zoomed off. They do every trick and skill, and one would end up being faster than the other.

Monty: Rollerblading is wonderful. See, Carson? See how I could out run everyone? Heck, I'm even out running you.

Carson: Uh...Yes, Master Monty...you certainly are...uh...skilled.

Monty: Indeed.

Suddenly, Burn, Prince, and Jamila zoomed past him.

Monty: WAH!? WHAT THE!??

Then Monty fell. Carson came to help him up.

Monty: Why didn't you fall, Carson? FALL OR I'LL HAVE FATHER SUE YOU!!!

Carson made himself fall again.

Monty looks ahead to where the trio went.

Monty: Who are they?

Burn, Prince, and Jamila reached the finished which is next to a bench.

Prince: Darn it! Burn beat us again!

Jamila pants

Jamila:...*pant*...*pant*...told ya...*pant*...

Prince: How do I know you didn't cheat, Burn?

Burn: Because I practiced so much that I don't cheat at all.

Prince: WHAT DO YOU MEAN!? OF COURSE YOU CHEATED!!!

Burn: How, exactly?

Prince: YOU'VE BEEN PRACTICING!!!

Burn rolled her eyes. Then they heard.

Monty: HEY YOU!!!

Burn, Jamila, Prince: ?

Monty: How dare you!

Jamila: Umm...how dare we what?

Monty: YOU DARE ELUDE ME!!? I'LL HAVE YOU ALL SUED!!! WAIT TILL MY FATHER HEARS ABOUT THIS!!!

Burn: Come again?

Monty: YOU ZOOMED PAST ME!!! NO ONE IS ALLOWED TO!!!

Prince: Uh...Kid, I'd hate to break this to ya, but...this is a free run park. If you wanna be ahead of others then you gotta be good at rollerblading.

Monty: What!? Are you saying I stink at skating!? How dare you! That's it!!!

Carson: Master Monty, calm down.

Monty: I won't have my father sue you anymore. I'll have you beaten!!!

Jamila: What's this kids problem.

Burn: Let's get out of here before I hear something stupid coming out of his mouth again.

Monty: Why you! Your not going anywhere!

Monty grabs Burn by the arm, and Prince by the back of his hood jacket.

Monty: Carson! Call father quick!!! So I can watch these two get beaten!!!

Burn: How about you beat it?

Burn pushes Monty so hard, he skated backwards and fell backwards into a garbage can.

Burn: Oops...

Carson: MASTER MONTY!!!

Jamila: Let's get out of here!

Burn, Prince, and Jamila rolled off as quick as they can.

Carson helps Monty out of the trash can.

Carson: Master Monty, are you alright?

Monty: Why that no good...THEY'LL PAY FOR THIS!!! ESPECIALLY THAT BLACK HAIRED GIRL!!! I'LL HAVE HER DEPORTED!!!

Carson: But Master Monty, she could be a citizen here.

Monty: I don't care!!! I'll have her deported to some place so dangerous, then she'll wish she'd never done this to me!!!

Carson: Sire, I'm sure she didn't mean...

Monty: Are you arguing with me, Carson?

Carson: No, Master Monty!

Monty: Good, now...to find out where they live. I'll have father send in the FBI to track them down.

Carson: *sigh*




That's it for now. Hope you enjoyed a short idea for this story. Don't worry, when I make the comic, it'll be long and have an ending.